Reviews: Naruto Arashiodori

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Pacing Killed it For me...
I managed to get to around chapter ten before I had to call it quits. The writing isn't necessarily bad, but two things just turned me off. The first thing was pacing; it takes ten chapters and over 40,000 words to finish the fight that the fanfic starts off with. That's the equivalent of a short novel already. The second thing that turned me off was that after the Naruto vs Gaara fight, we get sucked into ANOTHER fight that lacks any sense at all.

I guess if you enjoy epics, this could be the fic for you, but I think the pacing and logical inconsistencies just doesn't make reading this fic worth it.
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