Reviews: Incomplete Life

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This is actually a really good story. The synopsis makes it sound like a ship fic between Wrath and Winry, and that is one aspect of the story, but its much more than that.

It also involves mystery, and drama, and action. Wrath has to deal with some villains in this story, including at least one that's familiar. Can be exciting but also explores the characters, feeling like a real story and spinoff/sequel to Fullmetal Alchemist.

Only a few moments where the writing is a little iffy. Most of it is quite good.
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