Reviews: Fate/Inertia Dawn

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By zoner16
This fic has great setup and readability, but falls into a rather regrettable strain of wish fulfillment later on. Rather than presenting a coherent storyline, it stumbles in introducing too many servants for their interactions with their masters to get off the ground, and the war itself seems to take a backseat to having various video game and anime heroes fight and interact with each other, sometimes for no
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By Darkholme
The servants are well-chosen and each one has a certain . . . chemistry with their master. Great grammar, spelling, and sentence flow. The story manages to really capture that Fate Stay Night feel so many fics seem to lack.
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