No clue what the other reviewer was thinking, great fanfic anyway.
After reading the fanfic I read the one review from the from comments section and I'm pretty sure the writer posted it in the wrong place or something because it doesn't even make sense so don't pay attention to it.
Anyway this fanfic is excellent, very complex but still easy enough to read that it is fun. Itachi gets perhaps the best characterization I have ever seen mostly because the majority of it is from his perspective. Naruto shows up later and the author skillfully doesn't screw him up as a character like so many Naruto fanfics do. Overall I highly recommend this story.