Reviews: Clouded Mind And Heavy Heart

Well done.

This is a really good Naruto/Sasuke fic. It should be noted that the manipulation is really only in the first part of the series and their relationship becomes much more healthy later on, especially in the 5 chapter add on that takes place mostly from Jiraiya's perspective.
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