Reviews: Mass Vexations

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At least it's not a Mary Sue...
Difficult to read, mostly because all it does is follow The Stations of the Canon while plopping a self-insert character into the mix. He adds almost nothing to the story, other than occasionally dropping some commentary on pop culture and his personal preferences in movies and music.

He makes no attempt to hint or warn the key players about the coming apocalypse, and makes a point of trying to hide the fact that he knows anything at all.

Reading through the trope page, I assume he eventually gets called out on it, but that's so far along the story that I just don't have the will to slog through the beginning to get to that point.
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