Well... Let's start simple, then. First, it's great. The characters introduced are done excellent justice, the monologues are to die for (literally), and the grammar and spelling frequently stuns. It's elaborate and features a Xanatos Pileup
of epic proportions... that extends throughout the fic.
A gem amongst fanfiction and recommended for its sheer ability to so beautifully meld the Nasuverse and world of Prototype.