Reviews Comments: Comment by Gaston1991

Comment by Gaston1991
The characterisation of Alielle and Fatora is interesting. In this stories, Fatora is capable of real love towards Alielle but the author doesn't make her too sympathetic. The humor is excellent and mainly based on Alielle and Fatora's personality. The original character Formyka is well done and could be a character from the original show. At the end of the last chapter, the author announces two stories that have not emerged, but this does not affect the quality of this fanfiction.


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