Reviews Comments: A good story with a few minor flaws
A good story with a few minor flaws
The author does a very good job of showing the psychology of the people who would willingly be in Super Smash Bros. to begin with, and how they interact with each other. Despite not being much of a slash fan, I thought the scenes aren't shoved down your throat, and they can be skimmed without missing too much if that's not really your thing. It loses much of its comedy in later chapters, but it's still a gripping fic. While the O Cs can feel [[Mary Sue]]-ish at times (mostly Vick), that's a minor flaw in a story this good.
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