It's a fun read at first- What would Harry do if he loves technology as much as magic, having grown up with Tony Stark? The problem is that the author clearly loves the Marvel universe and is determined to show how much better it is than the Harry Potter universe. Harry seems to solve all his problems by asking for help from his Marvel Superhero friends. He gains plenty of superpowers from a hidden exoskeleton to personal training from Captain America, Marvel Universe-type magic, etc.
But superpowered Harry isn't the only problem. He's not even interested in the magical world per se, he just wants to be there to make it better. He vehemently refuses to learn about his biological parents, as if that would be an insult to his adoptive father. He makes friends with just about everyone, acting almost prophet-like in his forgiveness and willingness to work together. There's no conflict at all that isn't solved by the end of the chapter...
Too Much Sue
It's a fun read at first- What would Harry do if he loves technology as much as magic, having grown up with Tony Stark? The problem is that the author clearly loves the Marvel universe and is determined to show how much better it is than the Harry Potter universe. Harry seems to solve all his problems by asking for help from his Marvel Superhero friends. He gains plenty of superpowers from a hidden exoskeleton to personal training from Captain America, Marvel Universe-type magic, etc.
But superpowered Harry isn't the only problem. He's not even interested in the magical world per se, he just wants to be there to make it better. He vehemently refuses to learn about his biological parents, as if that would be an insult to his adoptive father. He makes friends with just about everyone, acting almost prophet-like in his forgiveness and willingness to work together. There's no conflict at all that isn't solved by the end of the chapter...