It starts off strong, with a couple of powerful scenes, but soon enough it degenerates into filler upon filler with very little progress done.
The only thing that keeps it going is the ungodly momentum its' acquired so far.
It's a grammatically well-written marathon fic... but unfortunately, that's it.
Great Worldbuilding, Mediocre Story
It starts off strong, with a couple of powerful scenes, but soon enough it degenerates into filler upon filler with very little progress done. The only thing that keeps it going is the ungodly momentum its' acquired so far.
It's a grammatically well-written marathon fic... but unfortunately, that's it.