Is terrible. Not only is it terrible, if not for the good grammar, it would become downright unbearable. The bashing is uber high and the marty sue harry super annoying. If only people knew decent writing, instead of favouring this excuse for a story.

Comments

  • kay4today
  • 24th Sep 13
"Invincible Technomage" alone raises alarm flags in my head.
  • DrWillHatch49
  • 7th Oct 13
"Bashing" in and of itself isn't necessarily a bad thing, especially when you have an over the top racist society with a bad case of Medievel Stasis like the Wizarding World.
  • doctrainAUM
  • 7th Oct 13
The Wizarding World never does anything racist. In fact, there aren't any signs of racial prejudice, unlike the real world. Do you mean speciesist? If so, yeah, they definitely do that a lot.
  • kay4today
  • 8th Oct 13
Depends on who is bashed. I can excuse making characters like Lucius and Bellatrix even worse than they were in canon, but turning Dumbledore and Ron into manipulative rapist bastards? Simply a case of bad writing.

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