Adept
(Holding A Herring)
Jul 9th 2015 at 5:24:10 PM
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I think that part can be cut down. Her entry is already quite long as it is, and I doubt those stuffs you mention adds anything to her hateability. It's also really rant-y compared to the others.
In Courtney's Scrappy entry, does there really have to be "she looks too happy winning Stripper Of The Year" and "she wears heels and lipstick" in there?
I cut up one dozen new men and you will die somewhat, again and again. Hide / Show Replies