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03:07:29 PM Jul 26th 2010
There, I think that should about do it. Massively cleaned up the original grammar and formatting, and also added a few things of my own into the mix. Anyone who sees any further improvements is free to add them.
04:58:10 PM Jul 26th 2010
Nice job :) now it Is a likeable trope
02:36:53 AM Sep 5th 2010
It was still all over the place. I further refined it.
03:52:37 PM Nov 11th 2010
It's "We wear the mask that grins and lies, It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes". Cleaning up the grammar of a poem isn't the best thing to do.
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