OK, I'm not very good at writing sexual things, so I'd like comments on this. Is it plausible for them to act this way?
The maid hummed as she wandered through the hotel rooms, changing sheets. It wasn't an entertaining job, she had to admit, but it wasn't very unpleasant, and it paid the bills.
When she entered one room, she paused, seeing a strikingly handsome man perched on the bed. "Oh, I can come back later." She started to back out of the room.
"No, go ahead." He got off the bed and headed to a chair nearby. "Don't mind me." She nodded and set to work, acutely aware of his eyes on her.
"You're very beautiful." He commented.
She froze. Not again! She didn't want to have to rebuff yet another guy who mistook maids for prostitutes. "Thanks." She said curtly, and continued working. "My boyfriend thinks so." She lied.
When she was finished and turned around, he was behind her. She jumped, realizing she hadn't noticed him moving. "Oh, sorry for startling you." The guy said, putting his hands on her shoulders to steady her, his brown eyes meeting hers.
Heat flooded through her. "It's OK." She said faintly. She wanted him to keep his hands on her. She wanted to tear his clothes off, and her own as well. Dimly, she knew that it was ridiculous to feel this way about someone she'd just barely met - a stranger to this town, furthermore - but she couldn't help herself.
"Would you be able to stay here with me awhile?" He asked. "Put off work, for an hour or two?" He released her and started pulling his shirt off.
She watched him, entranced. "I'd love to." Following his lead, she set the dirty sheets aside and started undressing as well. Before long, they were in bed together.
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