Eye'm the cutest!
#2: Nov 4th 2010 at 12:16:28 PM
Show the battle in its entirety.
"Allah may guide their bullets, but Jesus helps those who aim down the sights."
Ettina
Since: Apr, 2009
#3: Nov 4th 2010 at 2:40:45 PM
Act it out, preferably with a friend. That's what I do when I'm stuck on a scene.
If I'm asking for advice on a story idea, don't tell me it can't be done.
Total posts: 3
So, I mapped out my story by making a web showing each major event ("steals sword", "arrives at castle", ect) in it, so I know where to go.
But I realize now that I have some trouble getting from one event to the next. Like right now, I have a naval battle occurring, and I know how I want it to end. I want to want to link the finish to the beginning of the battle, but don't wanna resort to padding.
Any advice?
Weird in a Can (updated M-F)