Going from one plot point to another...:

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1 DrFurball4th Nov 2010 12:11:04 PM from The House of the Rising Sun , Relationship Status: Tongue-tied
Two-bit blockhead
So, I mapped out my story by making a web showing each major event ("steals sword", "arrives at castle", ect) in it, so I know where to go.

But I realize now that I have some trouble getting from one event to the next. Like right now, I have a naval battle occurring, and I know how I want it to end. I want to want to link the finish to the beginning of the battle, but don't wanna resort to padding.

Any advice?
2 MajorTom4th Nov 2010 12:16:28 PM , Relationship Status: Barbecuing
Eye'm the cutest!
Show the battle in its entirety.
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Act it out, preferably with a friend. That's what I do when I'm stuck on a scene.
If I'm asking for advice on a story idea, don't tell me it can't be done.
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