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• Super Buu, the later form of Evil Buu, has the evil of Kid Buu but, unlike Fat Buu, who is too childish to know better, has the ability to understand about his own evil thanks to the intelligence he gained from absorbing the Kaioshins. He just doesn't care. Once made eloquent by Piccolo, he actually lamented killing off all of humanity earlier because destroying their cities wasn't as fun without them screaming. When told by Piccolo to go kill off some humans to buy some time for Goten and Trunks to master the fusion technique, his response, out of impatience, is to fire a barrage of energy beams that lock on and kill every human outside of Kami Tower except Mr. Satan; this is conveniently called the Human Extinction Attack, because it fired exactly as many blasts as needed to bring the human race to extinction. Soon after this, he turns Chichi into an egg to smash it because she was annoying him. Once he's fed up, he turns Krillin and everyone on Kami's lookout except for Gotenks and Piccolo into candy and eats them alive. After his fight with Gotenks he absorbs both him and Piccolo by playing on the former's arrogance and lack of situational awareness. Now superior to Gohan who had trounced him earlier, Buu then beats him to near-death while at the same time using Piccolo's teachings to mess with his head and mocking him for being unable to save his mother and brother from A Fate Worse Than Death. His power fades before he's able to finish Gohan off, whereupon he enacts his back-up plan, and sneakily absorbs Gohan as well. The immortal and nigh-unstoppable Super Buu then declares that he will spend the rest of his existence slowly killing off all life in the universe, taking joy in the suffering of its helpless inhabitants for all eternity. When he's finally confronted with someone that he cannot either overpower or outsmart (Vegetto), Super Buu becomes so enraged that he starts releasing all of his power through screams, warping the space between dimensions and making them collapse and crush each other. If he had not been stopped, he would have destroyed the entire multiverse and everyone in it solely to spite Vegetto.

That is very long.

Holy shit. That's way too long and needs to b trimmed down.

to Morgana.

Yeah, thanks for revising the entry both hear and at the Drafts page, but it probably needs to be trimmed by, I dunno, 1/3 at least?

Oh right yeah almost forgot. I asked 43110 to trimm down N-Daguva from Kamen Rider Kuuga. So here's his new write-up and with credit to him.

• Kamen Rider Kuuga : The Gurongi lord, N-Daguva-Zeba is a sadistic Blood Knight and Social Darwinist who cares nothing for the lives of humans or his own kind. Upon being reawakened, Daguva releases his 200 Gurongi, slaughtering the archaeologists who found them. Restarting a brutal game in which the Gurongi hunt humans, Daguva kills over one hundred of his own kind. When the titular Kamen Rider defeats one of his henchmen, Daguva ambushes him, mercilessly beating him and incinerating countless innocents before leaving. Continuing his systematic genocide, Daguva attempts to bring about "Ultimate Darkness", turning humans into twisted, vile creatures like himself and even after being fatally wounded by The Hero, dies laughing, hoping he will become as evil as himself.

Also with a help from 43110 Heres Pike and Lesko's write-up's.

• The Flash's Arch Enemy, Nicholas Pike is a former police officer who was disbarred for his crooked involvement in criminal activities, swearing vengeance against Jay Allen for bringing his corruption to light. Forming biker gang, "The Dark Riders", Pike had his cronies terrorize Central City, torching streets and killing anyone in their way. When one member leaves out of disgust, Pike cruelly kill's him and later murders Jay for revenge. Storming the jail to free his men Barry Allen has arrested, Pike intends to use them to destroy the entire city and level it. In Flashfoward, after being released from arrest, Pike returns for vengeance on Barry, firing a heat-seeking missile at him which somehow sends Barry ten years into the future. An utter dystopia with Pike as Mayor, in it he forces citizens to submit to him lest he have them executed or lobotomized.
• Bougart/Beauregarde Lesko, from Child's Play ceates an insidious hallucinogen called "Blue Paradise", which becomes rampant in Central City. Creating a powerful physical addition, if users do not regularly take Blue Paradise, they die, much to Lesko's apathy. When suspected in the drug's production by a reporter, Lesko kills him by blowing up his car to destroy the evidence, also trying to murder a teenager who manages to get ahold of it. Trying to force the teen into addiction to control him, Lesko also tries to spread his drug over the city via helicopter, not content until he can control the entire population with his drug.

Thoughts ?

edited 9th Jun '18 1:34:37 PM by miraculous

Looks good.

I found on MCU: HYDRA – Leadership for MCU!Red Skull

• Alas, Poor Villain: Evil magic Nazi he may have been, it's hard not to feel a slight tinge of sympathy for him when it turns out the Tesseract didn't actually kill him, but stranded him on an empty, barren planet, with the Infinity Stone he so desperately desired right within his grasp and yet eternally beyond his reach, undying, and presumably all alone. For seventy years.

Good god. Some people give sympathy far too easily.

Delete it. The movie doesn't try to make us feel sorry for him,so it's not an example. I know that trooper who added it (Smallordvoice) their the one who kept putting BAOM under Ego's character page.

Seriously though man have you seen some of the psychos that people feel bad for under Jerkass Woobie and Cry for the Devil.

edited 9th Jun '18 1:50:42 PM by miraculous

I remember talking with Lighty about that. One COULD feel sorry for Skull...if he hadn't been a mass-murdering, attempting-to-kill millions, PSYCHO.

Mir, please add those to the Drafts, And please don't touch the Call of Duty stuff; I'm reordering and de-potholing the entries.

EDIT: Anyone know Super Buu enough to offer a condensed-yet-complete writeup?

edited 9th Jun '18 2:02:22 PM by ACW

I'd send to 43110 as per usual, he's familiar with the work. Though thanks to Dragon Ball 's popularity, their are quite a few people who could rewrite him but he's best when you wanna trimm a bad guy down.

Yeah, some people really gave the Draco in Leather Pants to this Psycho!

I you ask me this was an absolutely perfect punishment for The Red Skull and satisfying to watch Karma making him her bitch literally; With the soul stone so close to his reach, but knows he can never obtain it because he's such a horrible bastard with no loved ones other than himself.

edited 9th Jun '18 2:21:46 PM by G-Editor

Ha that's nothing on DINLP treatment. I had to delete this line from and I kid you not Griffith's actual Draco in Leather Pants entry that was utter garabge.

Woah

Yeah but this is utter crap and saying hes a Tragic Villain is outright ignoring what a selfish man, he is.

edited 9th Jun '18 2:45:05 PM by miraculous

Hasn't Griffith been subject to a LOT of Alternative Character Interpretation?

I'm currently reading Berserk and I have to agree that what Griffith went through was no picnic.

EDIT: I'm not contesting his status as a CM BTW.

edited 9th Jun '18 3:07:47 PM by Silverblade2

Don't start...

EDIT: Yes to the past couple of candidates.

edited 9th Jun '18 3:00:48 PM by erazor0707

BTW, for Ishikawa's stuff, I'll just keep them separate until/unless someone proposes a tree with all of them, as I have NO idea whatsoever (though Makai Tensho seems like it may be a fun read).

Here goes my writeups.

• Kill Squad: Joseph "Joe" Lawrence is a Vietnam veteran and Larry's best friend. Losing his feet during the war, Joe blamed the squad for the incident and sought revenge, becoming a wealthy businessman and training for years to have a chance against his former friends. Wanting the ownership over everything and hating his wife for rejecting him, Joe hired Dutch to gang-rape and kill her, ordering him to shoot him afterwards. Feigning being wheelchair-bound to divert attention from himself, Joe created a so-called "Killer Game" by making the titular "Kill Squad" eliminate Dutch and his men, while he assassinated them and potential leads to the case. After killing four members of the squad, Joe attempted to kill another one by slashing him with a sword and trying to impale him with it.
• Fallout: Morbid initially presents himself as an arrogant and unpleaseant man, but is revealed to be greed personified. As Junktown's resident physician, Morbid offers medical assistance for enormous prices, and is the only doctor in the wastelands to force his patients to pay him for the examination. Those who refuse to pay him are murdered by his two mercenaries and their bodies are taken to his underground lab, where are they are butchered into small pieces and sold to Iguana Bob, the human meat is then cooked to look like iguana bits and given to the population. If Morbid discovers that the Vault Dweller has visited his lab, he will let the player live only if he is allowed to remove an eye, declaring that "half of what you have just seen" is now his.
• Fallout: New Vegas rewrite: Vulpes Inculta is the leader of the Frumentarii and the Legion's chief strategist. Becoming a Legionary as a child, Inculta got the position of Frumentarius by disobeying orders and capturing the leader of an enemy tribe. Arriving at Dry Wells, Inculta took over the area and crucified those who resisted along the Interstate 40. Inculta is properly introduced after having slaughtered the citizens of Nipton, crucifying some of them and coldly telling the Courier to "memorize every detail". When Camp Searchlight proved to be nuisance for the Legion, Inculta ordered Legionaries to commit a suicide attack by opening the base's radioactive containers, which did only kill several NCR troops that were stationed there, but also resulted in the ghoulification of the survivors. Disguised, Inculta visited the Strip and planned to chlorine bomb New Vegas with the assistance of the Omerta.

edited 9th Jun '18 3:51:22 PM by TheMadCr0w

Re: Griffith.

Let's be honest. Everyone has a ridiculously shitty life in Berserk. So much that honestly, I don't think that anything work as a Freudian Excuse there. The only reason why other villains don't qualify is because they have redeeming traits or fail the heinous standard.

Drafts please.

Also, for New Vegas, Clanden could maybe use an expansion as well, unless his current writeup covers everything.

edited 9th Jun '18 3:58:48 PM by ACW

Looks good. Wow Vulpes is way more evil than what hiscurrent write-up said he was. Also Fallout New Vegas has 6 CM's from one game. Kinda impressed.

Also here one last write-up For colonol Zol of OG Kamen Rider.

• Former Nazi, Colonel Bakarashin Iinodevitch Zol, joined Shocker and quickly gets a reputation for brutality. Transferred to Japan to deal with Kamen Rider 2, Zol brainwashes children into become Shocker troops and gases an entire town. Apathetic to the fates of his own soldiers, Zol dismisses their deaths and even tests the powers of a resurrected mummy-like kaijin by letting him murder one of his Mooks. Using another infectious kaijin, Zol has him kill a group of innocents, forcibly converting the survivor into a disease-carrier to spread more suffering. In the sequel series, Zol works with Doctor G to unleash toxic gas in Hokkaido and killing the innocent civilians.

Credit to 43110 and I'll add to drafts.

edited 9th Jun '18 4:00:11 PM by miraculous

For Embryo's entry, I have a question to ask.

• The aforementioned Embryo, the "Creator" of the world, was a scientist who grew tired of warfare and kidnapped the mighty DRAGON Aura to power the creation of a new world. Embryo creates a system where those without magic are oppressed and used as Cannon Fodder to kill DRAGONs trying to recover Aura, while discarding and recreating humans when they fail to impress him. Embryo seduces many of the pilots to his side, using Salia sexually while lying about how he loves her. When Ange herself refuses his advances, Embryo tortures her by forcing her mind to undergo overwhelming pain and then physical need. When Ange tries to escape, Embryo shows his true colors by taking over the mind of her faithful maid Momoka and even tries to fatally shoot Momoka when she resists. Upon the final battle, Embryo simply decides to obliterate all of humanity again, coldly rebuking one of his subordinates for caring about others, and tries to sacrifice his loyal followers to buy himself time. When he is through trying to seduce Ange, Embryo tries to beat and rape her before trying to kill her for not "accepting his love". He even allows children to die. Any positive actions or qualities are all just an act.

Are those last two lines really necessary? The first one, about letting children die, is kind of a given considering he tries to obliterate all of humanity, and the second, about his positive traits being an act, I think are already established by the rest of the entry. They just don't seem to add anything.

Cut those lines, yes.

So I was meaning to ask is there any reason Embryo is at the bottom of the tree. Isn't he the shows main villain and hence shpuld go to the top.

Oh yeah remove thoose rather pointless lines.

edited 9th Jun '18 4:25:48 PM by miraculous

I think I might've added those lines (not sure; it was awhile ago), but I just fixed the YMMV page and filed the cut for the CM page. I think NSWIE covers that.

As for the order, I dunno.