What do you think of these lyrics?

I'm not usually one to write lyrics, but I was recently inspired to after listening to a lot of Priest.

Plague, War, Famine, Death

Fighting to their last breath

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Eviscerating the Four Horsemen

Even Death Itself will die

Retribution to the wicked

Dark Crusader from the sky

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Disembowels heathen sinners

Gives them no chance to repent

Mutilates the tongues of liars

Punishes the arrogant

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He's the heavy metal hero

Legend of our time

O heavy metal hero

Vengeance will be thine

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Wading through a sea of corpses

Soaked in the blood of the damned

Lone warrior fighting dark forces

Plotting the downfall of man

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Demons flee out in a hurry

Taking to a coward's flight

None can sate his righteous fury

Devils tremble at his might

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He's the heavy metal hero

Last hope for mankind

Heavy metal hero

A Warrior Divine

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He is the Icon of Judgment

Cleansing this unholy ground

Blood rains down upon the pavement

Visceral carnage all around

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Bloodsoaked Adamantium weapons

Forged from the fires of Hell

Satan cowers at his presence

Knows that he shall fall as well

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He's the heavy metal hero

Savior of mankind

O heavy metal hero

Vengeance is now thine

edited 16th Oct '10 6:37:14 PM by Cysma

is "VENGENCE-Y" a word?