This is one of those that's going to be really hard to capture in a static pic without a lampshade...tempted to call it a BUPKIS case, but let's see if we can get some ideas.
^ I wonder if it works for those who haven't seen the film.
The only thing I got is Halo's flashlight with the little battery meter
I think her expression helps sell it, as she looks distressed about it to me.
Even without it, I think it's plain to see that's a fairly big torch with only one tiny flame coming out of it.
3 could work, I think.
(Annoyed grunt)Maybe as a caption: "Must...not...sneeze...'''
Heh. I like that.
(Annoyed grunt)Perhaps an establishing setting shot (panel 1 or 2) before getting to panel 3
edited 19th Jul '16 5:48:37 PM by eroock
Is that really necessary?
Although panel three here is lighter, maybe we should use that. Or would the darker one work better in this case?
I don't think the preceding two panels are necessary, and the darker panel actually helps with the expression of the trope.
3 looks good.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"I'll stick with 3 and Willbyr's caption.
(Annoyed grunt)This has gathered enough dust. The pic/caption combo is added and tagged; locking up.
This image◊ crashed in the Image Suggestion thread. Other ideas?
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"