It's an improvement since the context is self-contained.
So, what is that he's holding in his hand?
Check out my fanfiction!...I totally glossed over that the first time. Might be a little too suggestive.
I think it's a phone? But yeah, it's a bit awkwardly placed. The comic being black and white is not helping matters.
she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope ReportHonest i prefer the current. words are not necessary.
An alternative suggestion from Teen Titans [1]◊ or To Love Ru [2] (second panel).
I think the current is still the clearest.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"Been thinking about which is best, and not come up with an answer. I guess that defaults to the current. It doesn't require any text.
Check out my fanfiction!I'm happy with the current.
(Annoyed grunt)I think the current is fine. The body language and the blush on his face makes it pretty clear what his attitude is.
Reaction Image RepositoryYes, keep.
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she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope ReportConsensus is leaning toward the current, and it's adequate so it can stay unless we get a good suggestion soon.
Clock expired, so tagging page and closing.
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