#2: May 23rd 2016 at 6:40:10 AM
Eeeeeeyeah, that looks pretty much like JAFAAC to me.
#3: May 23rd 2016 at 8:14:39 AM
I can kind of see that it's supposed to establish something about the character, which may or may not be Totally Radical + bloodshed, but it doesn't show that it's a scene that's supposed to establish something about the character.
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TheUnsquished
Filthy casual
from Southern Limey Land
(Life not ruined yet)
Relationship Status: Married to the job
#4: May 23rd 2016 at 9:26:51 AM
Pull regardless of replacement.
(Annoyed grunt)
TheUnsquished
Filthy casual
from Southern Limey Land
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Relationship Status: Married to the job
#5: Jun 4th 2016 at 11:34:18 AM
Bump. Any other suggestions or opinions?
(Annoyed grunt)
#6: Jun 4th 2016 at 12:26:02 PM
Pull. Even though I can kind of see where it's going, the quality is awful.
edited 4th Jun '16 12:26:12 PM by DeisTheAlcano
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Since: Feb, 2016
#7: Jun 9th 2016 at 1:23:01 PM
Pull it. This is one of those tropes that I think by its nature is difficult to adequately depict.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
#9: Jun 23rd 2016 at 7:12:43 AM
Clock is set.
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#10: Jun 23rd 2016 at 10:47:32 AM
Voting to close since this has been dead since the pull.
TheUnsquished
Filthy casual
from Southern Limey Land
(Life not ruined yet)
Relationship Status: Married to the job
#11: Jun 23rd 2016 at 10:48:17 AM
Close it.
(Annoyed grunt)
Karxrida
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Since: May, 2012
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#12: Jun 23rd 2016 at 11:18:30 AM
Close.
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#13: Jun 23rd 2016 at 12:37:53 PM
What they said.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
#14: Jun 23rd 2016 at 2:06:44 PM
Locking.
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Not seeing this at all. It may be an example, but it doesn't exactly illustrate that.
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