It's an improvement.
Check out my fanfiction!I don't like it because it perpetuates "begging the question" misuse.
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.@Willbyr: I think just the second panel alone will suffice; as it would allow for a larger - and hence, clearer - picture. The first panel adds nothing.
edited 24th Jun '15 4:20:39 AM by peasant
Yeah, that's probably better.
Check out my fanfiction!I think the single panel works on its own just find. The question sort of comes off like a Pre Ass Kicking One Liner.
Reaction Image RepositoryBump; any other thoughts?
#5 is definitely an improvement over the current.
edited 5th Jul '15 3:55:57 AM by Morgenthaler
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"It's a guncock and it's meant to sound serious.
"Begs the question" is not a synonym for "raises the question", it is a kind of logical fallacy. That misuse is so common, it threatens to become the new meaning.
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.#5
edited 6th Jul '15 2:21:12 PM by justanid
to 5 but "WHAT" and "EXACTLY" should be rotated.
That seems to be an arbitrary thing to do.
English doesn't exactly have an exact word order. And if that's what it was in the original, it works. Even if I don't see the difference anyway.
Check out my fanfiction!That's how it was written in the source pic, so I have to assume that's how it appeared in the comic.
It works without. Unless someone comes up with something clever.
Check out my fanfiction!No caption.
And I meant it might read better aloud since he was continuing his monologue from panel that is no longer present.
But whatevs..
Agreed; no caption barring a particularely clever suggestion.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"It works fine without one. Locking up.
The current pic on Dramatic Gun Cock is all gun and no cocking. As a replacement, this seems a lot more effective.