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Deadlock Clock: May 14th 2015 at 11:59:00 PM
ThePope Since: Oct, 2010
#1: Apr 17th 2015 at 1:03:52 PM

The current image doesn't actually show an inner monologue, just a character standing there and others assuming he's having an inner monologue. For all we know he's having a mental lapse. It's a cute gag, but it's not illustrative at all.

Death Note is rife with characters spinning off into inner dialogue; here's a few examples.

[1] [2] [3]

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#2: Apr 19th 2015 at 9:28:31 AM

[up] That last one looks like it might be the best candidate from a cropping vs. legibility standpoint.

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#3: Apr 19th 2015 at 12:29:58 PM

8 (almost 10%) of current IP threads are started by The Pope about an article with an image from The Order of the Stick. Just sayin' :)

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#4: Apr 19th 2015 at 1:14:39 PM

but, Pope, it is an inner monologue. It's inner. Your suggestions rely on loads and loads and loads of irrelevant text (that will, definitely, confuse people) to demonstrate an inner monologue, and I could argue (in the same manner as you) that they don't show an inner monologue because out of context that could just be the narration of the manga. As I said, it will also confuse people who think that the text is relevant to the trope instead of the text of the Inner Monologue.

edited 19th Apr '15 1:16:16 PM by lakingsif

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ThePope Since: Oct, 2010
#5: Apr 19th 2015 at 1:51:18 PM

[up][up] And an equal amount of threads I've made in the past month are not Order of the Stick. What's your point?

If I see a bad image or have one that's better, I bring it up. Not my fault if a running trend for this site is having bad Order of the Stick images.

[up] If it's cropped to have the character, it's pretty clear that it's the character doing the monologuing.

edited 19th Apr '15 1:53:16 PM by ThePope

Sandbylur Since: Jun, 2009
#6: Apr 19th 2015 at 1:54:51 PM

Current illustrates an inner monologue infinitely better than the suggestions.

ThePope Since: Oct, 2010
#7: Apr 19th 2015 at 1:56:28 PM

Five paragraphs of monologuing later...

Sandbylur Since: Jun, 2009
#8: Apr 19th 2015 at 2:01:59 PM

Still not as good as Current to me. Ultimately, Inner Monologue is not a visual trope. Without some kind of lampshade hanging, even the most obvious example may not be a good illustration

ThePope Since: Oct, 2010
#9: Apr 19th 2015 at 2:03:55 PM

An example with a clear thought bubble (with the bubbles leading to the head instead of the point indicating a speech bubble) would help.

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#10: Apr 19th 2015 at 2:18:55 PM

Suggestion somehow manages to be worse than a stick-figure drawing.

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#12: May 11th 2015 at 2:38:40 PM

Would a piece of this page work?

http://manga.redhawkscans.com/reader/read/the_world_god_only_knows/en/0/15/page/5

It is to be read right-to-left though, a scanlation of manga.

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#13: May 11th 2015 at 5:11:36 PM

We discourage images that need to be read right to left as it isn't always clear to casual readers.

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#14: May 11th 2015 at 7:04:15 PM

That one could work if the speech bubbles could be flipped on their own, but their sizes mean that probably wouldn't work.

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#15: May 21st 2015 at 7:43:34 AM

The clock's way past due and the consensus is for the current; locking up.

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