Fanfiction Review Thread, Second Try

I'm sure that some of you may have been aware of this thread where us tropers drop reviews on those who publish fanfiction works online so that we can critique their work.

Since the original thread was locked up to inactivity for at least a year now... I thought that I could perhaps do this again.

Rules:

• Note that you were able to read the link provided by someone in another thread.
  • Put up a workable link that directs you to fanfiction websites like AO3, Fanfition.net, etc. where you can leave a review.
• Make sure that the post you did was posted on the thread so that the person knows that you're reviewing his/her work.
• After reading the said fic (one-shot or multi-chapters), edit the post with the words "Reviewed chapter X of Story Title by Author."
• Wait and see if someone else will read and review the story. Rinse and repeat.
• As a note. If you review someone without logging in, make sure to leave your TT name so that the person knows who you are.

I noticed that for some people who had a hard time reviewing, it's due to a lack of knowledge of the said fandom of the fanfic story he/she wrote.

I don't know how to go around this, except that I would probably suggest that the person who's going to provide the link to the fanfic story explain what the story is about and what fandom is the story based on so that the reviewer won't be confused. Also, even if you don't know what to do, probably the next best thing is to see if you can review the author's grammar/spelling/punctuation and offer advise how to make the chapter better. After all, we're human and we might make a mistake or two that we may have overlooked.

Any other comments/suggestions/thoughts to make this working for all of us, please feel free to chime in your thoughts.

To start it off again, I would like to do this by showing off the 18th chapter of Peacekeepers. Basically, this is a Super Robot Wars-style story of most Gundam series/mecha/characters with some SRT OG characters/mecha involved. The chapter is recent as of late due to health problems that I had at the time, so I hope someone can check my spelling and punctuation to see if it's okay.

edited 29th Jun '16 7:45:41 PM by Ominae

Sooo.. you're asking someone to grammar-check your chapter?

Basically yes. I'm requesting for that since it's been a while from the last chapter I published.

I've got two fics (most especially their latest chapters) that need reviewed: Classroom Crusaders, a Mahou Sensei Negima and Jo Jos Bizarre Adventure crossover, and Song of Love and Revenge, an Elfen Lied and Neon Genesis Evangelion crossover.

If anybody wants to drop something for me to review in return, I'll do so.

edited 27th Feb '15 2:16:06 PM by EvaUnit01

Reviewed the 3rd chapter of "Song of Love and Revenge", mate. And it's done. I decided to review everything and leave a review on the 3rd chapter to put all in one go.

I need someone to look at Conspiracy, with the 3rd chapter uploaded for a while now. Peacekeepers with the 19th chapter uploaded too for a while now.

Either one is okay. Let me know.

I suppose I can give Conspiracy a shot.

Still need reviews for Classroom Crusaders, though.

Thanks.

Dropped a review on Classroom Crusaders.

If someone would be kind enough to drop a review of there own on Streets of Gensokyo City, I'd appreciate it.

Reviewed the 1st chapter of "Streets of Gensokyo City".

Need someone who read Peacekeepers (or not, let me know) to review the 19th chapter. At the time, I updated this from my hiatus due to a variety of reasons, including personal matters.

EVA 01 INTERVENES EVENTFULLY!!

I will review Peacekeepers. I cannot say that I'll get to chp19, which you asked for, but I will definitely make a go at the first chapter.

In point of fact, good sir, I will review the first THREE chapters of that fic!

...because I need all three chapters of this fic of mine to get reviewed, particularly the latest chapter that I only just now published.

They're fairly short chapters, and I've observed that each progressive chapter is shorter than the last, so it's not like it'd even take anybody very long...

Thank you, kind sir.

They ought to be done now.

edited 27th Jun '15 5:21:40 AM by Ominae

Resurrecting this for starters:

And I need someone to review this chapter URL.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10447454/5/Conspiracy