Wait, you didn't see that the character who was speaking is the one towards whom the speech bubble is pointing? I'm not sure what to tell you, that's who speech bubbles work in the medium of comics.
Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!I'm with Helter on this one. The text pulls all the weight, and if you're not familiar with OOTS, then its hard to tell who's acting out of character. I like the comic, myself, but it does suffer from a bad case of Fan Myopia. I appreciate that you're willing to put in that much work for IP, but it still doesn't make it a good image.
Nay, all you need is basic knowledge of psychology to see that.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesOr it could be because the image and therefore text is tiny, and the speech bubbles are very confused. It doesn't help that the black character is taking up most of the characterization in that panel, so I assumed we were talking about him, since the other character only has a few lines. When he says "Gaah!" I assumed it was because he was freaking out, not because the other guy was so OOC.
I'm sorry, I think it's a poor image. Being really defensive about it isn't helping, Thecommander.
edited 15th Apr '13 10:35:47 AM by helterskelter
They're mouths are opened when they're talking. Check out m8e post on 59.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesI've seen all the versions. It's very text-heavy and it was hard for me to read. And their mouths are opened in every panel but one.
To all of them.
How's this?
EDIT: See post 87.
edited 24th Apr '13 9:50:30 AM by Willbyr
That works for me.
Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!That one's good.
edited 21st Apr '13 1:55:10 AM by Thecommander236
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesEh, sure. Best so far, though it's not saying a lot.
I thought that was my monitor screwing up...
edited 21st Apr '13 5:04:40 AM by AnotherDuck
Check out my fanfiction!I just realized the screwup at the bottom of the pic...it's fixed now.
Bump; anyone else?
Nope, it has my vote. I'm done here.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesDang, I just saw one more goof in the pic...I'll have to fix it tonight.
I am good with the QC pic.
Man, these pictures turn everyone into perfectionists. XD Especially me.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesOkay, since I was out last night - if/when this gets enough votes to use, I'll fix it then.
QC pic looks good to me.
Reaction Image RepositoryQC pic is... better than nothing, I suppose.
Six for, zero against so far.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesOne more for.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.For it. Not amazing, but definitely easier to grasp than the other suggestions, and doesn't actively hinder the trope. Pleased we have something, good find!
8 for, 0 against, then. I think that'll do it.
Don't make me destroy you. @ Castle SeriesGood enough. It's up, potholed, and tagged, and I added the scenario to the example list. Caption or no? I lean toward no.
Oh—this is about the OOC-ness of the white character? I didn't gather that at all from the image. It focuses entirely on the black character. I didn't even notice that it was the white character saying "gotcha, sucker". I'm sorry, this is a poor image. I know you're really invested in putting an image up, but it's not a good one.