That would be helpful. I am painfully aware that it is just the first draft. Like I say there are bits I need to check it is actually finished, and the first opening is a bit flabby and needs to have this extra scene dropped in. Its been revised in fits and starts as I go- editing has helped inspiration, but once I've got it into a definate final form, I will read through looking for corrections etc, then let a freind who has been very supportive, and seen it in bits, have a complete read through.
With those caveats it is in a position where someone could read it (on the understanding there are bits that need tightening) as a complete work.
I have a functioning chair, it may be a bit uncomfortable, but as soon as I knock off the rough edges I can sand and paint it, and put a nice cushion on it.
My only problem is I have two endings - Happy and Bitter-sweet, and I don't know which one to use!
edited 22nd Feb '13 9:38:28 AM by LastHussar
Do the job in front of you.