For this Luna villain it really depends on execution. A harmless 13 year old girl could be: tragic, creepy, pathetic, or mysterious, and all have an enticing read as any of those traits.
It is interesting though, since you have your typical dual natured thing going on. Although a woobie route might be a little clichéd...
: Is referred to as Twitch
: Is currently 21
: A mute, albino of ambiguous gender who has very odd tendencies. Constantly his trees whenever travelling, always waves at people until they wave back. Initially could not read, but taught itself how to, so now feels the urge to read everything and anything. Usually cheerful, but frequently suffers from panic attacks. Has been known to speak, but only a few have heard it.
: Powerful blood mage. Can mind control people, torture them, and will soon be able to call up zombies.
: This is a LARP character, so the weaknesses are in the stats. No armor, so no damage reduction, runs a pure mage build, so no sword, and is rather squishy. Personality wise, quick to anger, and does not understand basic concepts like gender, sex, love, and who is allowed to be killed.
: To fulfill its purpose, which involves an act of terrorism against the world and temporarily crumble it.
: Was raised in a cult who taught it that it was a prophet, and must do the goals above. A non violent cult, but very strict on a you-sin-you-get-punished route, which has led Twitch to be a bit of a self harmer.
Role in the story
: Currently is a good guy with the main group. A bit of an outcast, as it has used mind control for the Greater Good before, which many people dislike and have threatened to kill it before. When Twitch reaches max level, it will leave and come back as a villain, which will involve the rest of the folks trying to stop it.
: Born in a cult. Was mutilated to be genderless. Yeah. Not much else to say.
: I'll think about it...
edited 18th Oct '12 7:40:30 AM by MrAHR