That is not a trope, it is the page about a work, a comic book. It has a summary of the plot, with some spoilers hidden and others not mentioned (it was hard to describe that Iron Lad killed the Vision without revealing that Iron Lad returned, so I skipped it). Yes, it needs more tropes, but they will come. I have written this just a couple of hours ago, don't expect it to be complete in the first draft.
What needs to be fixed is the repeated "Comic book" in the title. I requested to change "Childrens" to "Children's" (as I can't generate the ' in a wikiword) and someone made some mistake
edited 4th Sep '12 4:06:31 PM by GrigorII
Ultimate Secret Wars
No, dude, what you had was list of events with no indication of what the story is about. None. You get the difference, right?
We never put spoiler font above the examples on a work's page.
Perhaps someone who reads the book could help you out.
edited 4th Sep '12 4:27:22 PM by FastEddie
Goal: Clear, Concise and Witty
Submitted a better custom title. But the page looks better now.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
@Grigor II: We have a Synopsis namespace for work summaries. You could copy the old description to Synopsis.The Childrens Crusade.
Let's just say and leave it at that.
Incidentally, I initially assumed this would be about the 90's Vertigo crossover The Children's Crusade. Should we set up some sort of disambiguation, or do we not bother disambiguating for works that nobody's created a works page for?
edited 5th Sep '12 12:39:49 PM by tbarrie
Is the description fine now?
Ultimate Secret Wars
Not really. I worked on it, though, and it seems okay now.
I take it English is not your first language. I'd suggest stopping by the Get Help With English
thread before adding anything else to the wiki.
No. There's a lot of Engrish and grammatical errors.
Damn. I didn't know Eddie was a ninja.
edited 5th Sep '12 3:40:40 PM by KingZeal
I have nothing else to discuss with people who insult me for no reason at all.
Ultimate Secret Wars
I've actually read it so I tweaked the definition. You actually made it inaccurate and a bit incoherent, Eddie. I made it clearer how it ties into the Marvel universe.
edited 5th Sep '12 6:18:16 PM by shimaspawn
Reality is that, which when you stop believing in it, doesn't go away. -Philip K. Dick
The description was nothing but a list of events. We need to know what the story is about. Or at least about its tropiness.
Goal: Clear, Concise and Witty