Cutting something based on its description sounds kinda strange... Even if the premise makes me want to drink the memories away on its own.
If its aimed at people her age (by proxy of two years, although I cannot imagine that 12 year olds would be interested in this....... So roughly if it is aimed at 14-16 year olds) I would say its.... Ummm. Weird, but not a violation of content, regardless of personal feelings.
Underwear is basically a swimsuit.... I mean, we have a trope for this double standard.... Umm. Yeah. Fully-Clothed Nudity
Edit: I will now skedaddle from this potentially tremendous work-landmine...
edited 30th May '12 1:49:40 PM by Roraborialis
Happens to be known as Walrus Jones in other circles.