...Oh, okay, I'll read it.
EDIT: Okay, I read the prologue and the first chapter.
The main hero, a 25 year old, has to restore "The Goddess of Loli" to power, and so has to hug (no, it's not an euphemism, it's just hugging) the "lolis" (sort of like Chosen Ones
or something like that?) to absorb their "loli" power, which is just some ball of light.
In the process he has to stop the Big Bad
The first "loli" is Bra from Dragon Ball GT. Her age is a mess (see the trivia at the end of this page: here http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Bulla)
, so I have no idea what to think there.
Anyway, if the work keeps following this pattern, then there probably isn't any smut or questionable content besides strange "lolicon" jokes and flirting between the hero and the girl whose age is vague.
I'll keep reading.
EDIT: Second chapter: the "loli" he hugs is this one: http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Minerva_%28Masterforce%29
Third chapter: Rin from InuYasha
If the whole story follows this trend, then it's probably okay as far as porn/pedobait goes. The more risqué aspects of it are the typical shonen jokes that are along the lines of "oh, were you hitting on that girl/woman? *eye wiggle*", "are you... jealous?" and "oh, do you like me? Tee hee *blush* *blush*".
And, you know. The whole inexplicable "goddess/knights of lolicon" premise.
EDIT: Up to Chapter 7.
O-okay. So far it seems that it's a self-insert fantasy where the hero defends the "lolis" (so far they have been young pre-teen girls, but also all the way to teens) from the Big Bad
who wants to kidnap them, enslave them and have his way with them or something, and to stop the Goddess of Lolicon, whom the hero has sworn to protect and restore to power.
He also hugs the girls to gain power boosts that keep pushing more and more into God-Mode Sue
Frankly, its biggest sin is reading like a twelve years old's idea of an epic anime fantasy and being in script format.
I'll keep reading just to make sure there isn't anything against the content policy.
There's no porn.
The story is no more risqué than the universes it visits, so you can use those as a measuring stick:
The author idolizes "lolis" to such an odd extent that I can't tell you if it's just a glorification of innocence or if there is a sexual aspect involved, but because there is so much more emphasis on going around having fights/Pokémon battles/Card Duels/what-have-you, it's all incredibly easy to miss.
Or it would be if the main characters would stop going on and on about finding the lolis and the powers they grant and how the character will fight for the Goddess
And oh God I just can't. I can't. I give up. My brain is mush right now. Please, you guys. Have mercy.
like a Crack Fic
, but once you read it, you realize that, despite the slight sense of humor going around that is so typical of this type of anime fanfic, the author is totally playing it straight as if it was an Epic Serious Crossover.
EDIT: I forgot to add, there is a scene where the hero sees the goddess in a vision, with a description where she has the body of a child (in the context of body shapes, saying that someone has the body of a "niña" definitely means a child).
"La figura de la diosa tiene aspecto de una niña... una pequeña rubita y mofletuda, que es la mejor descripción de lo que Mike estaba buscando: 'Una niña de corta edad, de gran inocencia y belleza infantil'."
("The goddess figure has the looks of a child ...a little blonde and with fat cheeks, whom best fits the description that Mike [the hero] was looking for: 'A girl of young age, of great innocence and childish beauty'." )
Chapters later, the main female character (whom unsurprisingly turns out to be the Lolicon Goddess herself
) says in one chapter:
"Se supone que la diosa es una 'niña de gran inocencia y belleza infantil', igual que sus súbditas... pero yo soy muy vieja, mi cara es aburrida, mis tetas son muy grandes... ¡no podría ser mas distinta! Es de locos."
("The goddess is supposed to be 'a girl of great innocence and childish beauty', like her subjects... but I'm too old, my face is too boring, my boobs are too big... I couldn't be any more different! It's a crazy idea.")
EDIT EDIT: No, wait, it looks like the Goddess is the main female character's mother??? what. I. what
edited 5th May '12 11:35:26 PM by Mazz