Romance of the Three Cities ~ Santo no Renai ~ Discussion

I'm here, don't worry. I'd assumed that the classroom thing would be rapping up.

I suppose now would be a good time to say that when she mentioned getting situated, I was implying she headed toward the classroom...

Sorry, I know I wasn't really clear... kind of left you hanging. I've been following along the whole time, though.

...I'll try to make my third character over the weekend. Sorry I keep slipping.

Now that class has started, we'll do introductions by the characters, then Time Skip to lunch.

I also added the homeroom teachers and the science teacher to the NPC list - the homeroom teachers will likely not really interact much with the students, but you can use them in dialogue. The science teacher is to help out the robot girls.

Sorry if I kept anybody waiting - was out tonight.

edited 20th Apr '12 10:03:22 PM by Sonzai

*realises I'm the only one writing names in western order*

You're not the only one, really. I do it too. <.<

Um, is it just me, or does Szaphyr miss quite a lot of commas and possibly line-breaks?
Also, I'm back from a weekend in the north. Fun.

Sorry if I do I'll try to pay more attention to it...

Yeah, you definitely miss commas. I don't want to sound harsh or anything, but please pay attention to it, OK? If you feel that you need help, this is the place to look for it.

Thanks.

English is indeed not my native language (that would be German), though the issue with the linebreak seems to stern from the fact that the post, for some reason, don't seem to notice me using just one linebreak...

I've figured out that I have to use two Linebreaks. But comma's have always been a problem of mine...

By the way I went back and edited some of my posts, so they should be a bit easier for you to read...

If you wish (and have the time) I'd very much appreciate if you could inform me about my future mistakes via PM so that I can go back to edit them...

edited 21st Apr '12 10:13:06 AM by Szaphyr

So, should I introduce myself to the classroom? Which one is Akari's? <.<

@Szaphyr: I'll do so. To produce a single line-break, tac \\\\ to the end of the line;
line break \\\\b gives you line break
b.
@Sachi: Prolly; Akari's in 1-3.

edited 21st Apr '12 12:16:14 PM by desdendelle

Ok thanks.
I'll see if I can make my post more readable...

Alright.
Aiko's description has been edited so that it should be easier to read.

edited 21st Apr '12 12:50:07 PM by Szaphyr

Thank you very much. Now I can attempt to form a mental image of her.

@Sachiko: Yep, Akari's in 1-3, and everyone who is in class now should introduce themselves.

My phone can't make the accent mark in Sadako's last name. I'll edit the post when I get home

My profile for Blondie is up!

...This one may be a handful.

And with that finally done, I think I'll watch TV and take a nap.

edited 21st Apr '12 4:08:35 PM by Scrounge

By my count, I think everyone's introduced themselves besides Imo, Hikari, and Blondie, so after they're done we'll skip to Lunch unless anyone has any objections. I think Beta is going to be being repaired during the homeroom period, and can return for the lunch interactions.

...Sorry. I just felt like Blondie should make her entrance in the hammiest manner possible.

It's now lunchtime!

Assume Beta was repaired and returned to class after the first period.

Okay.

...was the name of the teahouse an intentional shout out Scrounge?

OK, I'm done. I'll catch up with everything in the morning.

Yes... In case the waitress doesn't make it obvious.

Sleep well. See you tomorrow.

It was getting obvious after the driver's name.

I think you made a spelling error in about halfway through your last post. The beginning of the sentence doesn't make that much sense.