In my story there's three characters; the female lead, the male lead (The Baxter
) and the baxter's rival, the handsome lech-ish bad boy who is the female lead.
I want the handsome lech to describe how he feels about his love interest, but for his description to fall flat and be about empty passion.
So far I've got this,
"You know how it is with women. The ones you canít get out your head, even if you wanted to. Youíre walking down the street, catch the scent of someoneís perfume, or hell, a bagel, and then you remember them, youíre dizzy and feel like you canít walk straight. You know whatís that like, donít you?Ē"