Hello. I've started work on a SMT: Persona fic called "The Changing Of The Guard." Here's what I got so far: it's set after the events of P4, and begins with Yu Narukami being pulled back into the Velvet Room and being told he's no longer a Wild Card (he can't change Personas anymore) and must act as a mentor to the new Wild Card, a foreign exchange student named Isaac Baker. After Isaac settles in, he begins getting cryptic emails about "The Operator's Game". At school, he meets some new friends: Ichiro, a laidback, fun loving guy, Miyoko, a volleyball team member who's usually nice but has a short temper, and Rika, Miyoko's shy best friend.
After goofing off for a day or two, Isaac, Ichiro and Yu decide to go hang out at the mall, where Ichiro suddenly acts weird and runs off inot the mirror. Isaac and Yu catch up to Ichiro just to see him dive into the bathroom mirror. They follow, and find themselves in the Otherworld, a TV World-like dimesnion that manifests as a city that looks like it would easily fit into a post-apoc setting. They look for Ichiro, but run into a tall, thin man in a nice suit who seems to lack a face. The being calls himself The Operator, and welcomes Yu and Isaac to the Otherworld, then tries to "test" their ability and summons two Shadows. Yu summons Izanagi, his only Persona as of here, but is unable to fight both Shadows. Isaac makes a mask materialize and puts it on, bursting into blue flame and taking on the form of his first Persona, Gilgamesh. Yu and Isaac proceed to kick Shadow butt, and The Operator remarks on their power, and reveals Ichiro's location. But Ichiro ain't feeling so good...when they find Ichiro, he's covered in luminescent body markings and he's growling and snarling at the duo. Ichiro's being possessed by his Shadow, and he must have it pounded out of him. After fighting Possessed Ichiro, they face Shadow Ichiro, who calls Ichiro out for being scared of failing. After defeating the Shadow, Ichiro fesses up to his cowardice, awakening his Persona, Enkidu.
Aaaaaand there's the intro.
I need help making a plot with the Main Characters rescuing Shadow Possessed people from the Otherworld while also solving ARG-like puzzles set by The Operator. Feedback is extremely appreciated.
I have the urge to dissect you now...