Webnovel: Land Games:
- There are occasional typos and grammatical errors and such: this is expected to a degree, obviously, and they weren't too distracting but I did still notice them
- I like the characters a lot, and how you don't go into various terms and creatures and such without explaining what they actually are
- However, I noticed that some things did lack description, which left me wondering what they're supposed to look like: for example, Dreadnoughts. I know it's silly, but because I connect that term with huge naval warships, in my head I imagine Brand's 'Dreadnoughts' as massive naval warships on tank treads. Dragoons are another example: I imagine them as somewhere between a dragon and a hoverbike/motorcycle, but throughout I find myself wondering if that description 'matches up' with the author's intent. I think that may just be me, though.
edited 30th Nov '11 5:03:52 PM by Bluespade
edited 10th Dec '11 1:57:41 PM by Bluespade
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