Do you guys like to use them? I remember writing one in my now non-canon nano wrimo story last year. Not the best example of one, but hey, my first ever.
The only girl on Nightmare team got isolated and had to fight off a bunch of people, and it came down to a struggle with some blonde.
Though now it seems really narmy here and there in hindsight. I was really into it at the moment though.
From the work itself:
The four that died were all along the very front corridor, waiting for a breach, while two men, one woman, and an unarmed medic stood behind. The front desk. She aimed the pistol at the two men and fired, killing both, but was tackled by the woman.
Smashing against the wall, Andreaís back hit hard, stunning her. As the woman came at her, she raised her gun and fired blindly, missing. The gun clicked, and nothing fired. Andrea dropped her pistol, and clentched her fists against the wall, as her instincts told her to back up. The woman came at her with rifle, but made the fatal mistake of putting it to Andreaís face.
Before the rifle could fully meet her, Andrea grabbed the XM 8
, twisted it, and wrestled it out. Shots blindly went off, almost shooting Andrea in the foot. She use the momentum of the struggle to swing herself up and the woman down into the ground. The woman was wearing a helmant until then, which came off, showing long blond hair and an expression just as rageful as her own on her face...
...Grabbing her wrist, she took the blond haired woman and broke it, kicked her off , and pulled out her knife. She walked over, and relying on her memory of how she fought in El Salvador, she lost it. She came down hard and fast, stabbing her several times in the chest before turning to a sound from a second door way from inside the base.
All in it's nano wrimo crappy glory!
Have any of you guys ever written a designated girl fight scene? what do you guys think of them in general?
as of the 2nd of Nov. has 6 weeks for a broken collar bone to heal and types 1 handed and slowly