Hi, everyone. You may remember that a while back, I asked if the first page of my webcomic had crossed the line. Now, I'm back, asking if what's going on up to this point makes any sense at all.
I'm up to page 8. The most recent page is supposed to be a jarring shift, so I've got 2 questions. 1: Is what's going on in pages 1-7 clear? 2: Is what's going on in page 8 clear-ish (how it relates to what came before will be explained starting next week).