Let's make a harem show!:

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76 chihuahua05th Oct 2011 07:59:44 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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I think that probably should be how it ends, but we shouldn't decide yet.

But the OP also suggested for one of the harem leaders be a Bifauxian. Maybe we can run with that too.

edited 5th Oct '11 7:59:59 PM by chihuahua0

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Considering we have a Villain Protagonist, her going down in flames is really the only way to avoid a serious Karma Houdini. I rather dislike High Heel-Face Turn

edited 5th Oct '11 8:01:27 PM by Archereon

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78 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 08:13:26 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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How about this: While the Villain Protagonist won't go down in flames, she does have to make up for the things she has done. Que Spin-Off.
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Still a High Heel-Face Turn. Now, regarding the Villain Protagonist, how evil should she be? Personally I'd say just evil enough to avoid being an Anti-Villain, but Charming and Magnificent enough to be an entertaining protagonist. Of course, if her brand of evil is more Jerk Assery than outright evil, and she's more deserving of a Humiliation Conga than a Karmic Death, you definitely have a point.

So what is the plan (motivation) of this ma'am with a plan?

edited 5th Oct '11 8:23:42 PM by Archereon

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80 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 08:28:44 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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I got it! We can make the sweet girl look like a really feminine boy for that added recursiveness.
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So basically, she's a bit lacking in the "packages" department, and wears her hair short?
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82 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 08:42:15 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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**shrugs**

Sure, Why Not??
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83 chihuahua05th Oct 2011 08:46:35 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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I would add some really small tails to her hair, to give it an anime feel, but that all I would add to her appearance.

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Back to the evilness of the Villain...
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85 MrAHR5th Oct 2011 08:48:35 PM from ಠ_ಠ , Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
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They're called breasts. You can use that word on the internet, it's OK.
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[up] But just saying it is boring. Innuendo is much funnier.
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87 MrAHR5th Oct 2011 08:50:34 PM from ಠ_ಠ , Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
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Really? To me it just came off as immature or perverted.

edited 5th Oct '11 8:50:59 PM by MrAHR

88 chihuahua05th Oct 2011 08:50:47 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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@AHR: But "package" sounds funny...

@Arch: I would say not make her too evil, just mostly a maplicative jerk who move her pursuers around like chess pieces, causing hilarity.
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Where does this series intend to fall on the Comedy vs Drama scale? I assumed it would shoot for the middle, which is to say Dramedy
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90 Wheezy5th Oct 2011 08:57:39 PM from Tampa, FL. Again.
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All stories veer off-genre as you write them. (In my experience, anyway.)

edited 5th Oct '11 8:57:47 PM by Wheezy

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[up] Yeah, but what we're looking at now seems to be more of a Action-Dramedy series with a highly complicated Love Dodecahedron.
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92 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 09:19:45 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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How exactly do these girls get their haremettes in the first place?
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No idea.
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94 chihuahua05th Oct 2011 09:26:11 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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"Bad" Girl: She's the girl of the school? Maybe she has it all? When her boyfriend runs away and vanishes, she becomes a desirable item, but only a few are audacious enough to pursue her.

Thinking about it, maybe she is tired of having it all, and now wants to live on the edge, risking her reputation to push her new pursers in the right direction and see what happens.

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wait, what about the Fighting Shonen/Magical Girs(s and boys) concept?
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96 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 09:45:55 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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I thought we dropped the boys in favor of bifauxnens.
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97 Wheezy5th Oct 2011 09:56:52 PM from Tampa, FL. Again.
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I must have missed the part where it turned into an action.

Sorry to be so judgmental, but ugh...

edited 5th Oct '11 9:57:54 PM by Wheezy

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wait what? I'm really, really confused now...

I was under the impression that the harems consisted of mix gendered characters, and that their focuses were a Bifauxen and Bishoujo respectively.
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99 SandJosieph5th Oct 2011 10:04:06 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
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Wait, you're talking about the haremettes and not the lead ladies?
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100 Wheezy5th Oct 2011 10:05:39 PM from Tampa, FL. Again.
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Yeah... This is why writing stories entirely by committee rarely works out well.

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