Second draft heel turn:

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My writing teacher suggested that my protagonist's best friend/sidekick seemed really sinister, and he was expecting him to be the villain.

I hadn't intended that at all, but now I'm wondering if I should just run with it and make him secretly a villain in the second draft.
2 feotakahari30th Sep 2011 01:41:44 AM from Looking out at the city
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Make him teeter on the verge, and from there, determine whether or not he falls based on which would be more interesting.
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[up] Good plan.

Another one might be to emphasize his Mr. Vice Guy elements. Show his flaws, and show how his [whatever it is that makes him so sinister} elements get him into trouble, but also show his goodness in contrast to that and show him overcoming them for some Character Development.
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