I'm tempted to shout "BRILLIANT!" and wave my metaphorical arms around, but that's probably because I'm still on FF.net standards, where having consistently good grammar and punctuation, far from being a basic requirement, puts you in the top ten percent. Nonetheless, it's quite good. I know nothing about Doctor Who, nor do I know all that much about canon Evangelion; it's one of those series that I know entirely from fanfic. So I can't really comment on the characterizations of any of the characters, even the Eva ones, since most of the fanfic starts from completely throwing out Shinji's character, at least. I love the style and I really want to read more, so count your potential audience at at least one.
/checks story list
Ye gods, you must have started writing on FF.net about when it was founded
. When was that, anyway?
edited 23rd Sep '11 11:08:56 PM by alethiophile