Okay, I moved most of the middle stuff to the Analysis page, what do you think?
Fight smart, not fair.Much neater, but I would say that the references to losing powers or companions belongs on the main page (even if in shortened form), as well as some note of Wistful Amnesia — those parts aren't analysis, they're describing the main forms the trope takes.
edited 2nd Jun '11 3:37:01 AM by FantiSci
Perfect! ^_^ Nice work!
Are we done or does somebody want to give it a full rewrite?
Fight smart, not fair.I'd say it's done. It looks fine.
edited 19th Oct '11 3:38:29 PM by kyfhv
The only possible thing I can see to object to is linking to Can't Grow Up (a redirect) rather then Not Growing Up Sucks (the trope's actual name).
Otherwise, this is done.
I made the change suggested. This seems finished, i'm hollering a lock.
Description needs the analysis moved to the Analysis page. I'll be back when I'm done with my current task.
Fight smart, not fair.