As A Game Of Chance RP has shown, my one liners seem to be more like thoughts. I dunno, maybe that's just more my style.
And when I do write fight scenes, they seem to play out more like a Curb-Stomp Battle
than anything else.
A snippet from A Game of Chance, for reference, which is definitely more of a psychological thriller than anything else...
When Wolf woke up, he decided to head out before very many people were awake and actually do something before he ate for once- buy an extra set of clothes. They looked identical to the set he was already wearing, but it wasn't like he cared. He changed, checked his stuff... credit card, wolf charm, cellphone, and finally his tarot card.
He stopped and stared at it for a moment, wondering why he hadn't noticed this before.
...What did water have to do with dead people?
He thought about it for a moment, then shrugged and slid it into his boot for safekeeping. Whoever's running this must have an odd mind, he concluded.
Wondering if he was going to overhear anything like yesterday, he sat on his bed, listening for any weirdness to come through his door.
edited 4th Apr '11 8:04:41 PM by CrystalGlacia
We've got a solve for that.