Shall I Proceed with this Story?:

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1 SandJosieph17th Mar 2011 02:39:29 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
Bigonkers! is Magic
Or shall I take it out back, shoot it, burn it, and forget that the idea ever came to me?

I have essentially decided to take my "Joan's Bosom" story idea and turn it into revenge story set in a Steam Punk Western. The girl the two lead breasts are attached to is now a cowgirl who is out for the blood of a gang of Hard Gay cowboys after they raped and murdered her husband. And just like in my last version of this story, Joan's bosom eventually finds love when it turns out two of the outlaws are in fact bisexual. In the end, Joan gets her revenge on the gang's leader and finds peace for herself while her breasts get the affection they desired ever since Joan's husband was killed.

So, have I gone off the deep end yet or do I need to try harder?
I must ask. What's with the fixation on this lady's breasts?
"Whenever I feel like I know how computers work, I go to class and leave feeling like I'm wearing my pants on my head, eating paste."
3 SandJosieph17th Mar 2011 03:04:05 PM from Grand Galloping Galaday , Relationship Status: Brony
Bigonkers! is Magic
It was something of a self made challenge: To see if I could tell a cohesive story from the viewpoint of a body part. And since I'm something of a breast man, I naturally decided to try writing from the girl's bosom. Besides, too many large breasted characters are created solely for their boob size and I wanted to see if I could do something more.

edited 17th Mar '11 3:05:26 PM by SandJosieph

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