Unhappy Marriage:

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I was going for an Unhappy Marriage between a canon character and an OC in a fanfiction I'm writing. I've detailed it here:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ApMAR_caNiFba8LLtcXHfJrty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20110110202051AAWXAXj (It's easier than retyping whole thing).

If you want it in Tropespeak, I can certainly do that.

What do you think of it? Does it work? Can you think of ways I can improve it?

The fandom it's for is Inuyasha - the canon character (husband) is Kouga, while his wife is an OC.

Thank you!
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