Feedback on my TF2 Fanfic:

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Here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6493067/1/Sparking

I think it may be the first thing I've ever written that I'm actually somewhat proud of, besides my RTD games. As you can see, I haven't worked on it in a while. I'm definitely going to delete and redo the last chapter, dunno what I was thinking there.

Anyway, does anyone have any opinion on it?
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