Lovable RogueI came across this sad excuse for an article and even at a glance it seems to be nothing but an excuse to bitch about the subject matter. Unfortunately, I know nothing about the book or the film, so I cannot adequately decide how best to approach it. Nuke it and start over? Simple repairs? Cut it entirely? I haven't a clue, but this article as is cannot stand.
I wouldn't be posting at this forum if I didn't think it a necessary step.
Moved the YMMV and did some trimming.
All human actions have one or more of these seven causes: chance, nature, compulsion, habit, reason, passion and desire. Aristotle
YMM Vs are gone. Cutting isn't really an option. I think rewriting the more... problematic... sections would be sufficient.
The last thing we need is a lagoon full of bile.
The system doesn't know you right now, so no post button for you.
You need to Get Known to get one of those.
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