I liked the other version better. It was an apartment instead of a hotel, a hole in the wall instead of a keyhole, and the ghost was a normal woman(her eye was red because she was really badly beaten to death). I've never been able to find it in the internet though.
I'll forever be creeped out by Wake Up◊
partly because it was my first creepypasta and mostly because the Fridge Horror
. My god.
Kris Straub also comes to mind. I LOVED Candle Cove, I think it's his best while The Fulcrum is a close second. Mostly though his creepypastas are a hit and miss for me. When it's a miss it's forgettable, but when it's a hit, IT. FUCKING. HITS.