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Sidewinder Sneaky Bastard Since: Oct, 2009 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
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#1: Dec 22nd 2010 at 3:48:41 PM

So I'm writing a story in something of an episodic manner with each episode being a standalone story with elements that tie the entire thing together into an arc.

The problem is the length of each individual part. The first episode finally reached more than 15 000 words and the second one looks like it will do the same.

I'm worried that any reader is going t see the story, see a wall of text and then go: "I can't be bothered."

Should I cut my story into several, shorter, parts?

Voltech44 The Electric Eccentric from The Smash Ultimate Salt Mines Since: Jul, 2010 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
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#2: Dec 22nd 2010 at 9:10:10 PM

I often wonder about the same thing, seeing as how I'm biologically incapable of writing anything short.

My advice? Think carefully about the events that are going on in the "chapter". How does it start? What events are building up to the climax? What's the climax? What happens after it? How does the chapter conclude? Keeping a clear vision of what's supposed to go down in your chapter can help you decide if it's going to be really long (I suspect it's unavoidable, but others could disagree, and justifiably so) or if you need to splinter off one big chapter into multiple, smaller chapters.

Still, as long as your chapters are interesting, I don't see why there's any reason to worry about people getting bored/frustrated/annoyed by the length. Keep things exciting - with a dynamic, attention-grabbing beginning, though YMMV - and you could probably make them as long as you see fit.

Hope that helps you out.

edited 22nd Dec '10 9:11:20 PM by Voltech44

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Mist3rDragon Since: Aug, 2010
#3: Dec 23rd 2010 at 3:50:04 AM

Chapters should be as long as you can attempt to keep the readers interested, if the 15,000 words are interesting enough then there are no problems.

For your instance I would say you might want to split the three episodes into smaller chapters with about 5 or 6 chapters in each episode.

DaeBrayk PI Since: Aug, 2009
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#4: Dec 23rd 2010 at 11:00:20 AM

I don't think it matters much. If you want you could make chapters within the "chapters" and turn the "chapters" into part 1, part 2, and part 3.

Sidewinder Sneaky Bastard Since: Oct, 2009 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
Sneaky Bastard
#5: Dec 23rd 2010 at 5:31:09 PM

@ Dae

I already had to split the story up. Not because of this, but because of Deviant Art's character limit for written submissions.

I general I'm mostly worried about the short attention span on the internet (when Too Long; Didn't Read is given an abreviation, we know we've got some problems.)

MajorTom Eye'm the cutest! Since: Dec, 2009 Relationship Status: Barbecuing
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#6: Dec 23rd 2010 at 6:55:20 PM

I wouldn't be too worried about a Too Long Didnt Read scenario. Those kinds of people aren't really interested in reading period.

That said, there's nothing wrong with 15,000 word chapters. I have 19 chapters in my work started so far with almost 63000 words total across 128 (soon to be 129) pages in MS Word, an average of 3300 words per chapter. A fair number of chapters are much shorter than that and a fair number are much longer than that.

So really, unless you can fit whole books of plot (and I mean whole books' worth) in that 15000 page chapter, there's no reason to worry about how long they should be.

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