These are what we call the 'YMMV items.' Things that some people find in this work. We call them 'your mileage might vary' because not everyone sees these things in the same way. This starts discussions in the trope lists, a thing we don't want. Please use the discussion page if you'd like to discuss any of these items.
Ass Pull: At least one person thought that "Monica" just pulled everything that happened in this fanfic out of "her" ass.
Big Lipped Alligator Moment: A truck crashed and Patrick started opening gag-cans labeled Seanut Brittle like he did in "Pranks a Lot". This never gets mentioned again.
Crack Pairing: C'ren and Plankton. The author supposedly wrote a snippet of a threesome between C'ren, Plankton, and Doubloon Swallowin' Misty, an Original Character from his other fanfic Planktons Eye View in a deviantART journal entry. However, since the journal entry resembles a Crack Fic generator, this may or may not be true.
Draco in Leather Pants: Plankton is treated in the fanfic as a protagonist. C'ren is implied to have romantic feelings for him.
Mary Sue: C'ren knows martial arts, swimming, painting, architecture, trigonometry, fashion design, cooking, mechanics, chemistry, agriculture, guitar playing, singing, drum playing, and computer programming. And of course, marine biology, her profession. She also won a Gold Medal in the Olympics, and she is only 18 years old. And she claims to have men of all ages worshipping the ground she walks on.
Took the Bad Fic Seriously: The fanfic got flames from many angry, offended readers, not realizing that the story is not actually meant to be taken seriously. But James put on a good enough show that it looked like it was all in earnest.