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* SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
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* SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok com/watch?v=E7FOjklX6ds "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fiend finally leaves the circle after untold centuries, she just collapses in the boy's arms and cries.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fiend finally leaves the circle after untold centuries, she just collapses in the boy's arms and cries.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome:SugarWiki/AwesomeMusic: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.friend/lover.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Fiend finally leaves the circle after untold centuries, she just collapses in the boy's arms and cries.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome:
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Fiend finally leaves the circle after untold centuries, she just collapses in the boy's arms and cries.
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Not weeping - I remember that crying was novel to her.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: The fiend makes a lot of claims of doing awful things -- cursing families, destroying villages, plotting to wipe out humanity if freed -- but there's not a lot of evidence from what she ''does'' that she really would or did. Look at the double-handful of chestnuts she cooked while talking about the meteor shower: she was free and clear to haul the boy into the circle and leave when he was giving her them in the first place, but it didn't even ''occur'' to her that she could until after he was already gone. And while she claimed to have destroyed the entire village, torturing its inhabitants and razing its buildings, in revenge for their raping and killing her friend (possibly beloved), she also claimed that she would destroy ''all humanity'' if freed, and she obviously didn't. It would be as consistent a story if she was caught, weeping, in the midst of the dead rapists in the manor, and bound in the circle because she 'corrupted' her girlfriend ... or even that she was caught weeping ''having harmed no-one.''
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: The fiend makes a lot of claims of doing awful things -- cursing families, destroying villages, plotting to wipe out humanity if freed -- but there's not a lot of evidence from what she ''does'' that she really would or did. Look at the double-handful of chestnuts she cooked while talking about the meteor shower: she was free and clear to haul the boy into the circle and leave when he was giving her them in the first place, but it didn't even ''occur'' to her that she could until after he was already gone. And while she claimed to have destroyed the entire village, torturing its inhabitants and razing its buildings, in revenge for their raping and killing her friend (possibly beloved), she also claimed that she would destroy ''all humanity'' if freed, and she obviously didn't. It would be as consistent a story if she the decaying manor she's trapped in was caught, weeping, in the midst of the dead rapists in the manor, very town her girlfriend lived in, and bound in the circle because they trapped her there for having 'tempted' their daughter 'into' lesbianism -- whether she 'corrupted' her girlfriend ... or even that she was caught weeping ''having harmed no-one.''killed anyone at all.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: The fiend makes a lot of claims of doing awful things -- cursing families, destroying villages, plotting to wipe out humanity if freed -- but there's not a lot of evidence from what she ''does'' that she really would or did. Look at the double-handful of chestnuts she cooked while talking about the meteor shower: she was free and clear to haul the boy into the circle and leave when he was giving her them in the first place, but it didn't even ''occur'' to her that she could until after he was already gone. And while she claimed to have destroyed the entire village, torturing its inhabitants and razing its buildings, in revenge for their raping and killing her friend (possibly beloved), she also claimed that she would destroy ''all humanity'' if freed, and she obviously didn't. It would be as consistent a story if she was caught, weeping, in the midst of the dead rapists in the manor, and bound in the circle because she 'corrupted' her girlfriend ... or even that she was caught weeping ''having harmed no-one.''
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fiend finally leaves the circle after untold centuries, she just collapses in the boy's arms and cries.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xT4cavjz2Ok "Bleeding"]], the music that plays in Act 2 when Fiend reveals what happened to her friend/lover.
