YMMV: God's Demon

  • Romantic Plot Tumor: Arguably, the romance between Sargatanas and Lilith is a completely gratuitous love story that just adds cheap pathos. You could remove it and it would make no difference at all.
  • They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot: Lucifer has disappeared after the fall, and everyone wonders where he is. This sounds like a Chekhov's Gun, but it is never explored.
    • According to his website, this book was supposed to the first in a trilogy...